With You …. AasimNaseem, April 22, 2010May 20, 2025 When the sun shines over the world And birds chirp whole new songs When petals get fresh with drops of dew I feel I’m blessed, when I’m with you When grey clouds fills the sky And its time to love, for gals and guys I hold your hand and walk next to you I feel I’m blessed, when I’m with you When you’re in my arms, feeling my touch And showing your care and affection too much My lips over yours, giving love to you I feel I’m blessed, when I’m with you When waves touches us at seashore Our eyes love each other; so deep, so pure When our footprints on sand has a long queue I feel I’m blessed, when I’m with you I’m waiting for you, to come to my life All things will mend; no setbacks will arise May all bliss, all delights be part of you I feel I’m blessed, when I’m with you My Poetry I feel I’m blessedmy new poemmy poemswhen I’m with youWith You
awesomeeeeeeeeee ….. u r doing grt job in writing such sweet and full of lovable feelings poems … 🙂 Reply
Nice one Aasim. I would advice you to use complete words to make it look more sophisticated like ‘girls’ instead of ‘gals’ etc. Reply
Thank you Ma’arab bhai for reading and for your advice… from the next time, i will take care of them inshaAllah Reply
its really nice ………Gomd bless you more and i wish u b having it on bcoz sometimes we really loose n i have lost once…. i wish u dont ….God bless you having those moments again and this time 4ever with …. …… Reply
its really nice ………God bless you more and i wish u b having it on bcoz sometimes we really loose n i have lost once…. i wish u dont ….God bless you having those moments again and this time 4ever with …. …… Reply
hmmmmmmmm …… good one ……. and nice to see/read Word “God” repeatedly… God may Bless you with every Nice thing. 🙂 …… “Thing” 😉 Reply
really nice and full of love, deep emotions, truly depicting pure love for your partner. Aasim its really good. Keep it up you are doing good in poetry. Reply